tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3043332749289989279.post8684052210531480983..comments2013-09-25T19:45:21.337-07:00Comments on Writing A Kiss: The Built-Up-Hate KissDarci Colehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00155604971570768765noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3043332749289989279.post-20334973195921402902013-08-23T13:04:15.242-07:002013-08-23T13:04:15.242-07:00Agreed! GAH!Agreed! GAH!Andrewhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02115544398840204484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3043332749289989279.post-66953923933678540312013-08-19T11:04:15.655-07:002013-08-19T11:04:15.655-07:00CAIT! I need to read this one. Like ASAP. I loved ...CAIT! I need to read this one. Like ASAP. I loved the fight and I'm sure with the lead up between them that I'm assuming has been building, this is pretty darn HOT :)Jamie Greyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07504892632149036762noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3043332749289989279.post-64706777595678182052013-08-17T21:57:39.763-07:002013-08-17T21:57:39.763-07:00I don't know about this one, I see what it is ...I don't know about this one, I see what it is trying to do, melt the lines between fighting and love making by use of physical contact, Somehow it just doesn't work for me though. maybe if there was more description in the fight or maybe if we had a scene previous to this one that showed the sexual tension between the two it would work better. It is an ambitious idea to try and get on paper without visuals to go with it, so awesome points for making the attempt. and just cause it didn't work for me doesn't mean that it isn't good, it really could just be me. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07730889350557930666noreply@blogger.com